Good story, PTF, but I noticed this:
"(Betty is leaning her head on a bashful Archie's shoulder as a fuming Veronica places Jughead back down as Jughead pats her on her head.)"
How can Jughead be placed down by Ronica while he's being patted on the head by himself? That's quite a trick!
"(Betty is leaning her head on a bashful Archie's shoulder as a fuming Veronica places Jughead back down as Jughead pats her on her head.)"
How can Jughead be placed down by Ronica while he's being patted on the head by himself? That's quite a trick!